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Yet another one of Sushi and her never ending, always evolving bevy of cobbled together personal transportation. This time around she's retro fitted grav units on a junked scooter. Amazing what some people will throw away- shes riding it now.
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First, love your style. Some visually tasty things I might add are some stickers on the hover bike and maybe some more scuff marks on her shin guard and boots. You could add some sort or exhaust or cooling system for the engine. It would be fun to add a little story to the picture, by adding select details or a background, answering some questions on what she is doing or going on the bike, i.e. commuting to work or school delivering something, exploring the city.
The basket on the back seems to be missing a second mount to match the one that is displayed forward. The fish on the pull you might want to drop a bit it looks like it might be blowing in the wind since it is pushed out, but her hair is not showing any affect. Her boots do not really match the shadow cast by her over bike.
The riders bodies position is very well executed, the way you have her standing very natural and real. The face really captures emotion, like she is pausing to thin about something. This is done very well with so few details, it’s all pulled off with her eyes lips and slight tilt to the head.